Post by MetalAlimon on Feb 4, 2012 21:38:03 GMT -5
Plot: All Quintaglios know that they cannot lie in the light of day. Their blue muzzles will automatically tell others they were untruthful. Nobody thinks of lying. But what if someone found a way to lie? And what if they got carried away?
Chapter 1:
Ena-Chato sat in the middle of her living room. She was situated in front of a slab of stone, sitting on a tall stool. Beside her was a small cup of black ink, a little dripping over the edge. To keep it from getting dirty, she removed her green and black sash on the floor. She extended a finger claw and dipped it in the ink. She pressed it against the paper laying in front of her and began writing. This was the only sound that could be heard in her home.
This wasn't the first time she wrote today. Beside her, on the left side of the slab, was a pile of many papers she spent time writing today. She had hardly taken a break. She wanted to get them done and sent out before the sun would set soon. This was the last letter she needed to write. She could feel her arm and hand aching from the continual writing.
Unlike most quintaglios, she was right-handed. This fact didn't really bother her that much. The only time she would feel awkward was if someone were watching her. Unless someone were watching her, there was no way they could tell she was right-handed, and the same applied to everyone else. Those who did know about this were generally stunned since right-handedness was extremely rare amongst her people. A few deeply religious folk did express their strong opinion about her, but she did her best not to pay attention.
She stopped only when she felt something on her shoulder. Her solid black eyes rolled over to see a small creature perched on her shoulder. She extended her arm, allowing the creature to crawl along it like it was a branch of a tree. The small animal was Peka, her pet. Peka was a small wingfinger with a lightly fuzzy body, a long tail, a short curved beak, and a sharply pointed crest on her head. She was dully-colored, sandy brown like the mountains, with the only brilliant color being a band of light red on her crest.
Peka chirped a few times, her light yellow eyes darting in all directions. Chato lowered her arm as far as it would go. Peka jumped off and began walking along the ground. This sight always made her happy. Peka was close to her. She considered her almost like a child of hers. She lowered her tail and, like always, Peka would climb on it and cling to it.
But she knew she couldn't focus too much on Peka today. She turned her attention back to the letter she was writing. These letters made her feel strange. They were unlike anything she had written before. She didn't even know if it would work. She was afraid of the answer. She may land herself in trouble either way, regardless if it worked or not. She refused to tell anyone about her intentions, not even...
There was a knock on her door. She stopped what she was doing and lifted her head towards the wooden door. A familiar voice called out to her. "Permission to enter your territory?"
Chato hesitated. It was a good friend of hers, Dar-Mebel. She looked nervously at her pile of papers. She couldn't keep him waiting. "Hahat dan..." She spoke, her voice soft yet loud enough for him to hear.
The door opened up and inside walked in Mebel. He was slightly younger than her, so his stature was somewhat smaller than her. His green skin harbored a few scars from battles he participates in. Even though she did really care for him, she didn't particularly like the fact that he was part of a small cult that had fights with small hornfaces. Many quintaglios had perished in such a foolish display of bravery. She worried he would be next.
"So..." Mebel asked, running a hand along the back of his scaly head. He kept a respectable distance from his friend. "What have you been up to? I haven't seen you in a while."
"Oh I..." Chato wasn't sure how she should continue. Like the rest of her kind, she couldn't speak a lie. Her muzzle would turn an obvious shade of blue if she did. Mebel would be able to easily figure out her secret because of this fact. She had to think of something else. Thinking fast, she said, "I was writing some letters that I would like to be delivered to the Capital City."
Mebel turned his head towards the pile of papers. If he hadn't done this, she wouldn't have known where he was looking thanks to their eyes, nothing more than solid black orbs in their heads. "Oh really? You could have just told me this was what you were doing." He eyed the stack up and down. "A lot of work here. A shame I couldn't have helped you."
"Yes. It's a real shame." Chato agreed. "If I do this, I just might consider having you help me."
"That would be an honor." Mebel said, lowering his head in her direction. "I enjoy working with you."
"And I enjoy working with you." Chato said. She finished up writing and went to work winding the paper and used a thin piece of flexible rubber to seal it. This was the same thing she did with the other papers. She piled them together and used a long rope to tie them all together. She looked up at Mebel. "Would you mind seeing that these are delivered?"
"I'll see to it that they are hand delivered to the emperor, Dy-Dybo, himself." Mebel said, rubbing his loose dewlap. "But I have to wonder. What did you write in these papers?"
Chato fell silent. This was the question she hoped he wouldn't ask. She searched her mind, trying to find some truthful answer that wouldn't make him suspicious. "I..."
"Oh you don't have to tell me." Mebel said. He clicked his teeth in good humor. "I will just take these and deliver them for you..." He grabbed the papers and started to carry them towards the door. His tail, dragging on the ground, caught on something sharp. Mebel winced and dropped the papers. He looked down at his tail. There was a piece of wood that was raised off the ground. "Wood shards. Heh, what can you do about them?"
Chato wanted to move forward to help, but she didn't want to risk sending them both into dagamant. This awful territorial frenzy was dominant among her people. It prevented them from getting very close to each other unless they were in mating season. She watched nervously as Mebel gathered up the papers. One of the papers popped loose and unfolded, its contents exposed. She reached out towards it, wishing she could grab it. She watched as Mebel picked up the paper and looked at it.
"This one came open. I'll just tie it up again." Mebel said, but then he paused. His black eyes slowly widened, his jaw hung open. He scanned the document in his hand, reading the words written on it. "My God..."
Chato got down from her stool, but did not get any closer. "Now Mebel..." When he looked over at her, she froze. She couldn't tell if he was upset with her or in shock by what she had written. "There's a logical reason for that."
"Save it." Mebel said, his voice firm. "The people must know about this. And here, I thought Tak-Saleed was an okay guy." He turned his head towards Chato. "I am glad to help you expose Saleed for the fraud that he was. I don't know how you figured it out, but that will be revealed in due time." With that, Mebel turned around and walked out of the door.
A piece of paper flew from his arms and landed beside Chato's three-toed feet. She knelt down and picked it up. She looked at the contents that she had written. The part that stood out the most was the first two sentences. It read: "I am very sorry to deliver this news, but Tak-Saleed, famed astrologist, has been exposed as a fake. New evidence has come to light that Saleed has faked all of his findings regarding the planets."
It was an outright lie. This had never happened. No one had really found any evidence that Saleed faked any of his findings. And yet her friend, Dar-Mebel, had believed every word of it. She lifted her head and watched Mebel walk down the street. If he could be fooled by the written word, she wondered who else could. She held the paper in her hands. An idea developed in her mind. She clicked her teeth amusingly as she reached out towards her door and shut it.
She looked down at Peka. "It worked, Peka. Now to that the experiment has proven to be plausible..." She went over to her slab and stool. She climbed back on and pulled out another paper. "...let me see how far I can take this." With that, she began writing again.
Chapter 1:
Ena-Chato sat in the middle of her living room. She was situated in front of a slab of stone, sitting on a tall stool. Beside her was a small cup of black ink, a little dripping over the edge. To keep it from getting dirty, she removed her green and black sash on the floor. She extended a finger claw and dipped it in the ink. She pressed it against the paper laying in front of her and began writing. This was the only sound that could be heard in her home.
This wasn't the first time she wrote today. Beside her, on the left side of the slab, was a pile of many papers she spent time writing today. She had hardly taken a break. She wanted to get them done and sent out before the sun would set soon. This was the last letter she needed to write. She could feel her arm and hand aching from the continual writing.
Unlike most quintaglios, she was right-handed. This fact didn't really bother her that much. The only time she would feel awkward was if someone were watching her. Unless someone were watching her, there was no way they could tell she was right-handed, and the same applied to everyone else. Those who did know about this were generally stunned since right-handedness was extremely rare amongst her people. A few deeply religious folk did express their strong opinion about her, but she did her best not to pay attention.
She stopped only when she felt something on her shoulder. Her solid black eyes rolled over to see a small creature perched on her shoulder. She extended her arm, allowing the creature to crawl along it like it was a branch of a tree. The small animal was Peka, her pet. Peka was a small wingfinger with a lightly fuzzy body, a long tail, a short curved beak, and a sharply pointed crest on her head. She was dully-colored, sandy brown like the mountains, with the only brilliant color being a band of light red on her crest.
Peka chirped a few times, her light yellow eyes darting in all directions. Chato lowered her arm as far as it would go. Peka jumped off and began walking along the ground. This sight always made her happy. Peka was close to her. She considered her almost like a child of hers. She lowered her tail and, like always, Peka would climb on it and cling to it.
But she knew she couldn't focus too much on Peka today. She turned her attention back to the letter she was writing. These letters made her feel strange. They were unlike anything she had written before. She didn't even know if it would work. She was afraid of the answer. She may land herself in trouble either way, regardless if it worked or not. She refused to tell anyone about her intentions, not even...
There was a knock on her door. She stopped what she was doing and lifted her head towards the wooden door. A familiar voice called out to her. "Permission to enter your territory?"
Chato hesitated. It was a good friend of hers, Dar-Mebel. She looked nervously at her pile of papers. She couldn't keep him waiting. "Hahat dan..." She spoke, her voice soft yet loud enough for him to hear.
The door opened up and inside walked in Mebel. He was slightly younger than her, so his stature was somewhat smaller than her. His green skin harbored a few scars from battles he participates in. Even though she did really care for him, she didn't particularly like the fact that he was part of a small cult that had fights with small hornfaces. Many quintaglios had perished in such a foolish display of bravery. She worried he would be next.
"So..." Mebel asked, running a hand along the back of his scaly head. He kept a respectable distance from his friend. "What have you been up to? I haven't seen you in a while."
"Oh I..." Chato wasn't sure how she should continue. Like the rest of her kind, she couldn't speak a lie. Her muzzle would turn an obvious shade of blue if she did. Mebel would be able to easily figure out her secret because of this fact. She had to think of something else. Thinking fast, she said, "I was writing some letters that I would like to be delivered to the Capital City."
Mebel turned his head towards the pile of papers. If he hadn't done this, she wouldn't have known where he was looking thanks to their eyes, nothing more than solid black orbs in their heads. "Oh really? You could have just told me this was what you were doing." He eyed the stack up and down. "A lot of work here. A shame I couldn't have helped you."
"Yes. It's a real shame." Chato agreed. "If I do this, I just might consider having you help me."
"That would be an honor." Mebel said, lowering his head in her direction. "I enjoy working with you."
"And I enjoy working with you." Chato said. She finished up writing and went to work winding the paper and used a thin piece of flexible rubber to seal it. This was the same thing she did with the other papers. She piled them together and used a long rope to tie them all together. She looked up at Mebel. "Would you mind seeing that these are delivered?"
"I'll see to it that they are hand delivered to the emperor, Dy-Dybo, himself." Mebel said, rubbing his loose dewlap. "But I have to wonder. What did you write in these papers?"
Chato fell silent. This was the question she hoped he wouldn't ask. She searched her mind, trying to find some truthful answer that wouldn't make him suspicious. "I..."
"Oh you don't have to tell me." Mebel said. He clicked his teeth in good humor. "I will just take these and deliver them for you..." He grabbed the papers and started to carry them towards the door. His tail, dragging on the ground, caught on something sharp. Mebel winced and dropped the papers. He looked down at his tail. There was a piece of wood that was raised off the ground. "Wood shards. Heh, what can you do about them?"
Chato wanted to move forward to help, but she didn't want to risk sending them both into dagamant. This awful territorial frenzy was dominant among her people. It prevented them from getting very close to each other unless they were in mating season. She watched nervously as Mebel gathered up the papers. One of the papers popped loose and unfolded, its contents exposed. She reached out towards it, wishing she could grab it. She watched as Mebel picked up the paper and looked at it.
"This one came open. I'll just tie it up again." Mebel said, but then he paused. His black eyes slowly widened, his jaw hung open. He scanned the document in his hand, reading the words written on it. "My God..."
Chato got down from her stool, but did not get any closer. "Now Mebel..." When he looked over at her, she froze. She couldn't tell if he was upset with her or in shock by what she had written. "There's a logical reason for that."
"Save it." Mebel said, his voice firm. "The people must know about this. And here, I thought Tak-Saleed was an okay guy." He turned his head towards Chato. "I am glad to help you expose Saleed for the fraud that he was. I don't know how you figured it out, but that will be revealed in due time." With that, Mebel turned around and walked out of the door.
A piece of paper flew from his arms and landed beside Chato's three-toed feet. She knelt down and picked it up. She looked at the contents that she had written. The part that stood out the most was the first two sentences. It read: "I am very sorry to deliver this news, but Tak-Saleed, famed astrologist, has been exposed as a fake. New evidence has come to light that Saleed has faked all of his findings regarding the planets."
It was an outright lie. This had never happened. No one had really found any evidence that Saleed faked any of his findings. And yet her friend, Dar-Mebel, had believed every word of it. She lifted her head and watched Mebel walk down the street. If he could be fooled by the written word, she wondered who else could. She held the paper in her hands. An idea developed in her mind. She clicked her teeth amusingly as she reached out towards her door and shut it.
She looked down at Peka. "It worked, Peka. Now to that the experiment has proven to be plausible..." She went over to her slab and stool. She climbed back on and pulled out another paper. "...let me see how far I can take this." With that, she began writing again.